john mccoy story

well alrighty, even though i've only gotten one vote on my poll and theres a few more days left.. i'm just gonna go ahead and post the first part of my story! just for a small introduction on it, its a short story about moving on and finding ourself. its sad, sweet, and romantic. this beginning part of the story is the only really scary part of it, so when you read it and think, oh my gosh! this story is so sad and scary! its only that way at the very beginning. i'd love to have your comments and critiques!

*link to maida's story's blog -
www.johnmccoystory.blogspot.com*

oh and i'd like your help in picking a title for my short story! cuz i have no idea what to call it.. for the mean time, i'm just calling john mccoy story, thats the main character's name. so if you think of something good, i'd like to hear your suggestions!